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Nuzlocke Comic pg. 2

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Ok so here's the next page of my nuzlocke ^_^ I know its been a while since I uploaded but .. things have been crazy ..

Most of this is just developing up to the major beginning of the nuzlocke, so if it feels like the story is moving kinda slow, it should pick up a bit after the next part or so.

Umm .. I kinda realized that you can't really see the text that well in the last panel .. >>; .. my bad :icononionfailplz: So here it is below: vv
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Oak: Oh, thank you so much for delivering my package that has no plot significance to you for now except to give you Pokeballs. Have this Pokedex and go do my work for me!
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As usual, critiques and suggestions are welcome, but no degrading comments please :/
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Next page: coming soon ^^ ( hopefully >>; )

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I think your pokemon drawlings are good and your people work is getting there. I'd suggest using Gimp to color it and to ink it as well (What i use), though its just a suggestion. I'm really excited to see where this will lead and i hope you don't lose anyone (though we know it will happen). There's not really anything left to say its only two pages and its far to early to tell how great it will be, though its off to a great start. I'm sorry these are low scores its nothing against you its just not enough to evaluate yet.